OP, if you really want to make that paragraph perfect, or "academic", get rid of the contractions--seriously.
Also, that "s" that was added to "detail" isn't entirely necessary.
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OP, if you really want to make that paragraph perfect, or "academic", get rid of the contractions--seriously.
Also, that "s" that was added to "detail" isn't entirely necessary.
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I was asleep.
I was having a wet dream.
I was "thrusting" and gyrating my hips while asleep.
I "finished" in my dream.
I instinctively wake up with the intent of going to the bathroom to clean up.
I discover my mom and sister in the room.
They've been in there, apparently, for a while now...
I was asleep.
I was having a wet dream.
I was "thrusting" and gyrating my hips while asleep.
I "finished" in my dream.
I instinctively wake up with the intent of going to the bathroom to clean up.
I discover my mom and sister in the room.
They've been in there, apparently, for a while now...