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[missinpieces]

What do you do when the road gets dark
And ya lights get dim
And ya gas get low
You got nowhere to go
And ya friend turn foe
ya girl turn %$$
And everything just seem to be moving so slow
The water gets deeper
while ya arms get weaker
students teaching teacher
followers leading leaders
and the preacher needs a preacher
cost of living is high whole ya boss gets cheaper
...... LET ME TAKE A BREATHER
then ya son turns to drugs and
ya daughter needs a hug
she in search of some love
he inserts in to her
a seed that they dont even need
..... LET ME BREATH

 

[boss unk ii]

Originally Posted by 23islegendary

Originally Posted by solemunchies

Originally Posted by Boss Unk II

This one's called sunshine...

There ain't no way, to explain or say,
how painful the hangover was today.
In front of the toilet, hands and knees,
Tryin to breathe in between the dry heaves.
My baby made me some coffee,
afraid that if i drink some its probably coming right back out me.
Couple of advil's, relax and chill,
at a standstill with how bad I feel.
I think I need to smell fresh air,
so I stepped out the back door and fell down the stairs.
Sunlight hit me dead in the eye,
like it's mad that I gave half the day to last night.
A bad site made me trip on my %%!,
right into that patch of grass
like THAT'S LIFE!

All of a sudden, I realized somethin,
the weather is amazing, even the birds are bumpin.
Stood up, took a look and a breath,
there's that bike that I forgot that i possessed.
Never seen exercise as friendly,
but I think something's telling me to ride that 10 speed.
The brakes are broken...it's alright.
The tires' got air and the chain seems tight.
Hopped on, and felt the sunshine,
thanking God that this day is mine and only mine.

Oh dang, sounds just like this

�� Boss Unk II......

No. It's apparent that I was apparently using Slug's song on purpose. You apparently did not catch that, apparently.

 

[boss unk ii]

Originally Posted by 23islegendary

Originally Posted by solemunchies

Originally Posted by Boss Unk II

This one's called sunshine...

There ain't no way, to explain or say,
how painful the hangover was today.
In front of the toilet, hands and knees,
Tryin to breathe in between the dry heaves.
My baby made me some coffee,
afraid that if i drink some its probably coming right back out me.
Couple of advil's, relax and chill,
at a standstill with how bad I feel.
I think I need to smell fresh air,
so I stepped out the back door and fell down the stairs.
Sunlight hit me dead in the eye,
like it's mad that I gave half the day to last night.
A bad site made me trip on my %%!,
right into that patch of grass
like THAT'S LIFE!

All of a sudden, I realized somethin,
the weather is amazing, even the birds are bumpin.
Stood up, took a look and a breath,
there's that bike that I forgot that i possessed.
Never seen exercise as friendly,
but I think something's telling me to ride that 10 speed.
The brakes are broken...it's alright.
The tires' got air and the chain seems tight.
Hopped on, and felt the sunshine,
thanking God that this day is mine and only mine.

Oh dang, sounds just like this

�� Boss Unk II......

No. It's apparent that I was apparently using Slug's song on purpose. You apparently did not catch that, apparently.