What do you guys think?

[rob kylan]

I recorded for the first time yesterday at one boy's house. I write rhymes every now and then but never with no type of structure. So, I recorded just this4 minute lyrical exercise I know a lot of u guys rap so I figured I'd bring it here for some constructive criticism.

Here's the link.

http://www.zshare.net/download/637268883569f048/