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Its nice to see other forms of writing besides poetry alone...
i see some hip hop/poetry blends, for example... ima add something completely different... a shorty story i wrote...First attempt at it, but the one review i got so far on it said it was "enrapturing" lol which basically means it was a delightful read....although the topic is far from delightful... Please do not take this as a racial stereotype, or a demeaning feature based on race... I used african americans because i grew up around these types of black people, and have black family who acted out in these ways, minus the violence section. ive also been around whites and mexicans who have had similar experiences...i just chose to use black characters, because thats where my fingers went lol... i dont actually think my writing out, i just let it all go and what comes out comes out...its a long read, so skim through if you must, but i wouldnt post this if it wasnt an interesting and relatable read...
(Who Can You Trust? . . . Cycles)
"Look, im not gonna sit there and amaze you with big words and metaphorical techniques like im some sort of Ghostface type dude. I'm speaking from the gut... the soul... the heart... whatever you wanna call it... THIS IS ME, I AM ONE OF A KIND... thats what my moms always told me, and no i dont mean moms as in my one and only "moms." Cuz you know how people be adding an "s" to the end of mom, right? I had two moms...lesbians... My biological mother's name was Keshae, pronounced Kay-shay... Her partner/girlfriend/my second mom's name was Soniya, pronounced So-ni-ya. Keshae + Soniya Forever...that's what they carved in the tree outside our 1 bedroom apartment...Corny love ****, i kno, i kno... I couldn't stand that type **** since forever. My mom said i got that from her when she was a teenager; she couldn't be herself in the family she grew up in, so she tried to avoid any type of love or any other ways to express herself in a caring manner... She knew she liked girls when she was 12... She told her parents when she was 18, 2 months after she gave birth to me, Tymani (Ti-moni) "Ty" Edson... She never knew who my dad was...To this day, she claims i was a mircale baby, a true "God's Son." I'm 21 now, and i know she just doesnt have a clue who my daddy is...Like, she really has no clue whatsoever... I've heard stories my whole life, but her and i have never had conversations about it, and never will.
My mom was a prostitute from the age of 16-22, shes 39 today, and maybe its just my paranoia but sometimes i get a feeling she does some dudes and women on the side to pay rent and eat. She also has a sweet tooth for powder and ice. I cant blame her i been known to get my nose icy too. Sometimes you just gotta escape the past and the present.
Like i said, i am 21, but what i didnt tell you... was that i got 5 kids by 3 baby moms. I dont pay child support and i dont see any of them. The baby moms all still call me for the "D" though...and i aint just talking the ****...they be on some **** too, daily, around my babies. But how can i judge them when my own babies dont even know what they daddy look like. I can never blame my father for not being there for me, cuz he probably never knew, and still doesnt know til this day... I know i have kids, and i still dont see them.
Two days ago, my mom's girl, Soniya rode it for about 15 minutes, before my mom came home from looking for her fix. My mom got no clue, and i cant even say i feel bad, cuz of all the **** i went through growing up with all the kids and their parents knowing how my mom was. She would show up to parents day at school high, after being up for 3 days without sleep. She doesnt even know Soniya likes men too, and they been together for 17 years. The first time Soniya came on to me, i was only 15...You believe that ****? They always talk about dads taking advantage of their children in that way, well Soniya did that to me. Yeah, i kno, i was 15 and it wasnt like i was a little boy, but i wasnt ready for that ****... She knew it, she could tell i wasnt with it...she didnt give a ****. After the second or third time i began to like it, and when i was 16 i got my girl pregnant. She gave birth to two twin girls...i wasnt even at the hospital, cuz i was ******g with Soniya while my mom was passed out in her room after a 4 day binge. I wont even get into my other girls and the kids cuz i dont feel like i even deserve to talk about them..."
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"My name is Kenya, and i have two twin girls, who Ty has never even attempted to see once. My entire family has told me so many times to seek child support, but i know that broke *** fool aint got **** to give us... I hate to admit this, but i aint even got a high school diploma, so i strip and ho around to support my kids. I dont even think twice because im mommy AND daddy...I have to do what it takes for my two babies to have they food right. He always be telling people i know that i still call him all the time for certain things, and whatever, i aint gonna lie... i got needs too and he does make me feel comfortable at times...That's probably why Ty thinks hes off the hook when it comes to his two little girls, and his other kids with them other women....but he's got another thing coming.... trust me, hes got another thing coming...."
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"Ty, your mom is going out tonight, so you know its just us two alone tonight right...?"
"Yeah, Soniya....(laughs)... i know how it goes..."
"Good baby..."
THAT SAME NIGHT...
*BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG*
5 shots to the back of the head, Ty lies dead...
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What he would never know:
||| Kenya was hooking for both men AND women...Soniya was one of her main clients, bonding insantly...Neither knew of their mutual connection to Ty before hand; it took 2 months for this to come to light, when Kenya found a picture of Ty in Soniya's purse. Still, Kenya kept up as if it didnt matter, and wouldnt even take money from Soniya after their second or third encouner... Long story short, when Kenya confronted Soniya regarding their similar connection to Ty, they immediately concocted a plan to get rid of him. Kenya had been dreaming of getting back at Ty since the day the two girls were born. A day he was nowhere to be found...Soniya wanted Ty gone because Ty blackmailed her into allowing him to watch other guys engage sexually with her, as he watched.,and at one point joined in on. He was in to that type of stuff; it was a compulsion of his. So he threatened to tell his mom about the 6 year affair if she wouldnt do what he wanted, when he wanted. Soniya had feelings for Ty, him being the only man she was feeling like that, but he forced her in to things that made her begin to despise him. |||
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3 Hours later...
Keshae walks in to the apartment, high in the clouds off meth. As she stumbles towards her room she sees Ty's dead body, blood flowing from the back of his head down to his lower back in front of the bathroom... Before she can even scream....
*BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG*
5 shots to the side of the head, Keshae lies dead...
How convenient...
Now Ty's twin daughters can grow up with two moms...
That's the cycle...
The End...
Or is it...?
Don't underestimate the power of cycles...
i see some hip hop/poetry blends, for example... ima add something completely different... a shorty story i wrote...First attempt at it, but the one review i got so far on it said it was "enrapturing" lol which basically means it was a delightful read....although the topic is far from delightful... Please do not take this as a racial stereotype, or a demeaning feature based on race... I used african americans because i grew up around these types of black people, and have black family who acted out in these ways, minus the violence section. ive also been around whites and mexicans who have had similar experiences...i just chose to use black characters, because thats where my fingers went lol... i dont actually think my writing out, i just let it all go and what comes out comes out...its a long read, so skim through if you must, but i wouldnt post this if it wasnt an interesting and relatable read...
(Who Can You Trust? . . . Cycles)
"Look, im not gonna sit there and amaze you with big words and metaphorical techniques like im some sort of Ghostface type dude. I'm speaking from the gut... the soul... the heart... whatever you wanna call it... THIS IS ME, I AM ONE OF A KIND... thats what my moms always told me, and no i dont mean moms as in my one and only "moms." Cuz you know how people be adding an "s" to the end of mom, right? I had two moms...lesbians... My biological mother's name was Keshae, pronounced Kay-shay... Her partner/girlfriend/my second mom's name was Soniya, pronounced So-ni-ya. Keshae + Soniya Forever...that's what they carved in the tree outside our 1 bedroom apartment...Corny love ****, i kno, i kno... I couldn't stand that type **** since forever. My mom said i got that from her when she was a teenager; she couldn't be herself in the family she grew up in, so she tried to avoid any type of love or any other ways to express herself in a caring manner... She knew she liked girls when she was 12... She told her parents when she was 18, 2 months after she gave birth to me, Tymani (Ti-moni) "Ty" Edson... She never knew who my dad was...To this day, she claims i was a mircale baby, a true "God's Son." I'm 21 now, and i know she just doesnt have a clue who my daddy is...Like, she really has no clue whatsoever... I've heard stories my whole life, but her and i have never had conversations about it, and never will.
My mom was a prostitute from the age of 16-22, shes 39 today, and maybe its just my paranoia but sometimes i get a feeling she does some dudes and women on the side to pay rent and eat. She also has a sweet tooth for powder and ice. I cant blame her i been known to get my nose icy too. Sometimes you just gotta escape the past and the present.
Like i said, i am 21, but what i didnt tell you... was that i got 5 kids by 3 baby moms. I dont pay child support and i dont see any of them. The baby moms all still call me for the "D" though...and i aint just talking the ****...they be on some **** too, daily, around my babies. But how can i judge them when my own babies dont even know what they daddy look like. I can never blame my father for not being there for me, cuz he probably never knew, and still doesnt know til this day... I know i have kids, and i still dont see them.
Two days ago, my mom's girl, Soniya rode it for about 15 minutes, before my mom came home from looking for her fix. My mom got no clue, and i cant even say i feel bad, cuz of all the **** i went through growing up with all the kids and their parents knowing how my mom was. She would show up to parents day at school high, after being up for 3 days without sleep. She doesnt even know Soniya likes men too, and they been together for 17 years. The first time Soniya came on to me, i was only 15...You believe that ****? They always talk about dads taking advantage of their children in that way, well Soniya did that to me. Yeah, i kno, i was 15 and it wasnt like i was a little boy, but i wasnt ready for that ****... She knew it, she could tell i wasnt with it...she didnt give a ****. After the second or third time i began to like it, and when i was 16 i got my girl pregnant. She gave birth to two twin girls...i wasnt even at the hospital, cuz i was ******g with Soniya while my mom was passed out in her room after a 4 day binge. I wont even get into my other girls and the kids cuz i dont feel like i even deserve to talk about them..."
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++
"My name is Kenya, and i have two twin girls, who Ty has never even attempted to see once. My entire family has told me so many times to seek child support, but i know that broke *** fool aint got **** to give us... I hate to admit this, but i aint even got a high school diploma, so i strip and ho around to support my kids. I dont even think twice because im mommy AND daddy...I have to do what it takes for my two babies to have they food right. He always be telling people i know that i still call him all the time for certain things, and whatever, i aint gonna lie... i got needs too and he does make me feel comfortable at times...That's probably why Ty thinks hes off the hook when it comes to his two little girls, and his other kids with them other women....but he's got another thing coming.... trust me, hes got another thing coming...."
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++
"Ty, your mom is going out tonight, so you know its just us two alone tonight right...?"
"Yeah, Soniya....(laughs)... i know how it goes..."
"Good baby..."
THAT SAME NIGHT...
*BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG*
5 shots to the back of the head, Ty lies dead...
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
What he would never know:
||| Kenya was hooking for both men AND women...Soniya was one of her main clients, bonding insantly...Neither knew of their mutual connection to Ty before hand; it took 2 months for this to come to light, when Kenya found a picture of Ty in Soniya's purse. Still, Kenya kept up as if it didnt matter, and wouldnt even take money from Soniya after their second or third encouner... Long story short, when Kenya confronted Soniya regarding their similar connection to Ty, they immediately concocted a plan to get rid of him. Kenya had been dreaming of getting back at Ty since the day the two girls were born. A day he was nowhere to be found...Soniya wanted Ty gone because Ty blackmailed her into allowing him to watch other guys engage sexually with her, as he watched.,and at one point joined in on. He was in to that type of stuff; it was a compulsion of his. So he threatened to tell his mom about the 6 year affair if she wouldnt do what he wanted, when he wanted. Soniya had feelings for Ty, him being the only man she was feeling like that, but he forced her in to things that made her begin to despise him. |||
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
3 Hours later...
Keshae walks in to the apartment, high in the clouds off meth. As she stumbles towards her room she sees Ty's dead body, blood flowing from the back of his head down to his lower back in front of the bathroom... Before she can even scream....
*BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG*
5 shots to the side of the head, Keshae lies dead...
How convenient...
Now Ty's twin daughters can grow up with two moms...
That's the cycle...
The End...
Or is it...?
Don't underestimate the power of cycles...
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