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Hey Niketalk, been working on my stand up. I would love any feedback possible. Thanks
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I agree with the bit about working on your transitions. Maybe it's just me but I felt like at times you were rushing through a joke or talking slightly fast.Originally Posted by PLVN
Not bad at all man...
You seem comfortable in front of a crowd and your material is unique. I liked the bit about CPS taking your friend's kid away.
The only real criticism I can give is to work on your transitions a little.
Do you do any blue stuff?