My 1st track...lookin' for constructive criticism

[skysthelimithp]

i know NT is the best place to get it lol...my cousin made the beat...recorded in my homies crib...thats me on the 1st verse

 

[thebigguy1828]

I actually thought it was good.

 

[rawse]

Wasn't horrible.. keep doin ya thing

 

[CUNNiNGH4M]

u not bad at all... lyrics kinda simple but u was paintin a picture...

u got good mic presence...

flow wasnt fallin offbeat...

keep at it...

 

[Master Zik]

It was okay. Work on your lyrics and wordplay, it's the way you'll get better. Everything else was solid.

I wasn't feeling the beat much but it wasn't bad at all.

The dude on the hook reminded me of Slug the way he did it.

 

[skysthelimithp]

i appreciate the fact that you dudes took some time out of your day to listen to the track...and thanks for the feedback.

 

[i am michael bolton]

Nice. Your first track too? Couldn't get passed the 1st verse, but good work though. Just keep layin tracks down.

 

[socalboy23]

didnt love the beat but decent wordplay, better than anything i can do. keep it up

 

[da future nike rep]

I like it