NT Brethren, can I get some feedback on my first track

[melovp]

I've been building for awhile now, staying low-key, writing, plotting maneuvers, but I didn't have anywhere to record. July 3rd, I just woke up with this beat in my head and knew it was time. So I said %$$$ it and recorded this on my laptop.

This is my manifesto. This is me. 

Sincerely, Chris Wise.

http://twitter.com/getwise_1
http://blackmarketwares.com

(I was trying to recreate this Shyne pic)

 

[melovp]

I've been building for awhile now, staying low-key, writing, plotting maneuvers, but I didn't have anywhere to record. July 3rd, I just woke up with this beat in my head and knew it was time. So I said %$$$ it and recorded this on my laptop.

This is my manifesto. This is me. 

Sincerely, Chris Wise.

http://twitter.com/getwise_1
http://blackmarketwares.com

(I was trying to recreate this Shyne pic)

 

[melovp]

Also, looks like there needs to be an "Official NT Rapper Post," there's a quite a few loose tracks floating around the first pages.

 

[melovp]

Also, looks like there needs to be an "Official NT Rapper Post," there's a quite a few loose tracks floating around the first pages.

 

[hometownhero25]

Keep working on it. You also might want to get that song mixed for better quality
Overall though not horrible

 

[hometownhero25]

Keep working on it. You also might want to get that song mixed for better quality
Overall though not horrible

 

[chrisphreezy]

Hard to listen to because of the quality of the recording?

What do you record with?

 

[chrisphreezy]

Hard to listen to because of the quality of the recording?

What do you record with?

 

[melovp]

Originally Posted by Chrisphreezy

Hard to listen to because of the quality of the recording?

What do you record with?

Hard to listen to or hard to understand?
#%$! is extra basic, just used Audacity + my laptop's mic

I'll be getting into the studio when the $$$ is right

 

[melovp]

Originally Posted by Chrisphreezy

Hard to listen to because of the quality of the recording?

What do you record with?

Hard to listen to or hard to understand?
#%$! is extra basic, just used Audacity + my laptop's mic

I'll be getting into the studio when the $$$ is right

 

[CUNNiNGH4M]

u better off buying ur own equipment

 

[CUNNiNGH4M]

u better off buying ur own equipment

 

[waveyjoneslocker]

 

[waveyjoneslocker]

 

[chrisphreezy]

Originally Posted by MeloVP

Originally Posted by Chrisphreezy

Hard to listen to because of the quality of the recording?

What do you record with?

Hard to listen to or hard to understand?
#%$! is extra basic, just used Audacity + my laptop's mic

I'll be getting into the studio when the $$$ is right

Hard to hear only because of what you recorded with. If you wanna start small you should download Adobe Audition or some other free program and get a usb condenser mic.

It shouldnt run you that much

EDIT: Btw peep this track for me http://niketalk.yuku.com/...Thoughts-Opinions-Needed Thanks bruh

 

[chrisphreezy]

Originally Posted by MeloVP

Originally Posted by Chrisphreezy

Hard to listen to because of the quality of the recording?

What do you record with?

Hard to listen to or hard to understand?
#%$! is extra basic, just used Audacity + my laptop's mic

I'll be getting into the studio when the $$$ is right

Hard to hear only because of what you recorded with. If you wanna start small you should download Adobe Audition or some other free program and get a usb condenser mic.

It shouldnt run you that much

EDIT: Btw peep this track for me http://niketalk.yuku.com/...Thoughts-Opinions-Needed Thanks bruh