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This entry is especially lengthy. It is mostly focused on history and not economics or politics or the policy debates of the moment. In my next few columns I will get to that. This article covers a variety of things, it starts with a history of West Africa and moves to a history of Slavery and then moves to the way some scholars have missed the main lesson of slavery because they have an agenda and finally it ends with something making what is otherwise an article about history, relevant to some of the present day policy debates. It probably the equivalent to six or seven pages in a magazine so I suggest that if you read it, set aside a little bit of time, maybe get some coffee and if you please, would you kindly give me some feed back.

I look forward to debating with the smart folks on this board who will probably read my article but I would be much obliged if you could give some feed back on the style as well as the actual content. I have been giving some serious thought to a career as journalist and I am going to use my semi monthly column as a test of sorts as well as a way to entertain and maybe inform, a community that has done a good deal of both.

I was initially going to respond to someone's comments in a recent thread about slavery, where some people recited the narrative that never in history have white people been enslaved, let alone by non whites. That is not the case. Before 1700 any society that existed or had existed had slaves and had people from that society who were slaves. Even if an entire people were never conquered and enslaved, people within the society would almost always be sold as slaves in exchange for food during times of famine or to settle a debt. Because our society has, thankfully, come to the realization that slavery is evil, some non whites, when presented with this very fact, in essence the challenge to that narrative stating that slavery is a uniquely white sin, become upset when they should not become upset, they should feel empowered. The fact that non whites have conquered others, including whites, and enslaved them shows that we all have the same brains, the same brains with the same natural impulses, for better or for worse, we all have the same impulses and the same capacity for good and for evil with all of us. While the narrative that slavery is something done exclusively by whites to non whites makes non whites, especially blacks, seem noble it often times goes hand in glove with that other narrative that is also, unfortunately a part of the World view of far too many, that blacks are savages, noble savages perhaps but savages nonetheless.

Many blacks with whom I have studied or discussed history or current events, upon learning about just how much blacks conquered other blacks, how they struggled for political power within their own polities (palace murder and intrigue are not just the domain of Shakespeare, how they wanted to obtain as much wealth as possible and were capable of being overtaken by jealousy and vanity and rage, actually feel empowered because if their brains work exactly the same way Europeans brains do they must also posses all of the positive qualities contained in the brains of Whites, Asians and everyone else whose culture had obtained a higher level of technological sophistication.

Anyone who engages in modern scholarship of social science knows that African societies’ development was severally impeded by geography and that European, North African and Asian cultural development was accelerated by the forces of geography (read Guns, Germs and Steel for a very detailed but fun and enjoyable to read explanation of geography and how it shaped history). Considering that Eurasian culture was able to advance because Eurasian geography favored farming, specialization, literacy and the ability for crops and technology to move eastward and westward from its place of origin, any given society in Europe or Asia got the majority of its useful ideas from other parts of Eurasia.

With Eurasia being the first place where people farmed (owing to the fact that a majority of agriculturally useful plants are native to Eurasia and all but one of the 14 species of large mammals that can be domesticated are native to the land mass) as well its being a roughly 8,000 mile long and 800 mile wide zone of arable land, coastline, natural harbor and inlets and navigable rivers, ideas not only moves quickly but it was home to the majority of humanity. West African societies were almost entirely cut off from Eurasia and its pool of shared ideas, West Africa’s population comprising less than a twentieth of humanity, it is partially cut off from other West Africans and almost entirely cutoff from Eastern and Southern Africans, Western African societies nonetheless reached, on their own, sophisticated states, agriculture, mining and metal working that put them on par technologically with the Ancient Greeks and Romans in many respects.

While writing did not come to West Africa until it was introduced by foreigners (as was the way writing was obtained for all but three societies to have ever existed) there is no history of what undoubtly took place, an ethnic group or collection of similar ethnic groups, surrounded to the South and West by Ocean and constrained by the vast Desert to their North, expanded Eastward.

Without a written history, the series of conquests and displacement of Africans by other Africans is hard to precisely date and chronicle as is the case with Iron age conflicts in Europe and Asia. Luckily, Archeology and Particular distribution of linguistic and ethnic groups in Africa paint a picture of Iron age farming societies forging iron weapons, forming militia groups at minimum and more likely small armies and killing, enslaving and taking the land of the hunter-gather societies to the East and the South. These conquerors, collectively known as the Bantu, brought with them a common language and over time and through Africa's isolation inducing geographies hundreds of languages and dialects have emerged in a band that bends from the Ivory Coast, around the jungles, through Serengeti plains and down to much of Southern Africa.

This band avoids the dense jungles of the Congo, the Kalahari Desert and the Mediterranean climate on the tip of Africa. The shape of this empire of sorts was based whether or not the land could support their staple crops, yams and cassava and other starchy, energy rich tubers that allowed them the ability to become farmers. Those crops grow well on the savannah and require heavy monsoonal rain in order to thrive and the densest jungles, deserts and even semi arid climates are unsuitable for their crops. The Twi (known largely as pygmies) and the Khosan people (known widely as the bushmen of the Kalahari) look very different from the dark skinned Bantu people and speak completely unrelated languages. Both groups probably lived in a much larger area than they do today but by the time of European exploration and conquest those people had been confined to an forever associated with the Densest Jungles of the Congo and with the Driest portion of the Kalahari Desert. Testing of paternal lines and linguistic analysis show that in some areas Bantu blood and dialects, all originally from the Ivory Coast region, make up the population and languages as far south as South Africa, Shaka Zulu was Bantu for example and he lived in what is now South Africa and his iron weapons were as sharp and as deadly as the weapons welded by a Roman Legionnaire or a Greek Hoplite. In other places, the populations were mixed to a degree showing that some Bantu might have taken Twi and Khosan women as slaves and had children with them. Perhaps as far back as circa 1,000 BC, armies of ebony skinned explorers and conquerors did with their razor sharp and deadly Iqwah swords what pale skinned explorers and conquers did 25 centuries later in the Americas, found people on land they wanted and killed most, raped and mixed with some and pushed the rest into the land that was economically undesirable.

What all of this means is that when given the opportunity black people, African people will look to expand beyond their homeland, they will seek wealth, they will seek better opportunities, they were able to build an iron age society out of Mesolithic (nomadic hunters and gathers who worked with stone tools and had no knowledge of farming or metal working) on their own (something no other society can claim to have done) and they used their superior weapons granted to them by their own innovation and their force of number made possible by growing crops to and the ability to raise armies that can only happen with farming as farming is needed to have specialists who do not have to far and can train to fight and lead armies and collect taxes needed to build and maintain those forces under arms.

The image of Africans running with spears and with loin cloths from lions is simply not real, some time , perhaps around the time of Rome's founding there were Africans in loin cloths running but not from lions. they were running from two legged predators and instead fearing the tooth or claw or horn of an animal they feared the iron blade of the most fearsome animal of all. I think that the image of a Bantu warrior chasing down a Twi or Khosan man in order to kill him and to rape his wife and daughters and to enslave his sons, although brutal do much more to combat all of those ghosts of Blumenbach that haunt the collective psyche of even those who want to portray Africa in a positive way. If you want to give true dignity to people who had been conquered and subjugated by you or those like you by imagining the conquered as noble savages, or as simple yet vibrant people or the other condescending terms used by those sympathetic to African and other non Western nations.

Before moving into the broader issue of slavery, I will transition by mentioning a fact with which most of you who are still reading by this point are familiar. Africans enslaved other Africans and most slaves chained together and shipped like animal across the Middle Passage where actually captured by other Africans. Unfortunately this fact is usually used as an attempt to downplay the brutality of the slavery that existed within the "Triangle of Trade," or if not to minimize the intent is to spread the blame around and off of the white slave traders. Whether or not the slave trader captured the Africans or not changes nothing about the guilt or European slave traders and severity of the Middle Passage.

What ought to be changed by the reality of Africans being the primary catchers of slaves, is the perception of Europeans as omnipotent, Europeans from 1450 to 1850 were unable to break into the interior of Africa because they would be resisted by Iron weapons wielding warriors whose numbers could negate the slight advantage afforded to smooth bore, single shot muzzle loaded muskets. It would take Repeating rifles, Gatling guns and, most importantly the geographically induced isolation on the continental scale and political fragmentation on a local scale. Africa, all of it south of the Sahara was never able to form a nation state, there were some kingdom and some very rich men like Mansa Musa but without any powerful nation state, Africans were the vulnerable people, the people who were always enslaved. With the rise of Nation states in European, Africa was doomed to become the source of slaves for Europe and Middle East for several centuries but that was not always the case, in fact, for most of history there was slaver yand slaves were never taken from thousands of miles away from the places in which they would be enslaved.

Slavery was commonplace in ancient Europe, in the North and in the South, virtually all Greek and Roman philosophers considered slavery to be an unavoidable fact of life and most of those slaves were either conquered people from places like Iberia, Gaul, Southern Britannia ( what are now Spain, Portugal, France, Belgium, Switzerland, England and Wales), Greece, Anatolia (modern day turkey and at the time inhabited by people whom you would call white), Thrace and Dacia (modern day Romania) or the slaves were people who could not pay back debts so they enslaved other Italian/Romans as well.

In the middle ages, people like the Frisians specialized in capturing and selling slaves and the many Vikings found slave trading to be much more lucrative than raiding for gold and silver. The city of Dublin, for instance, grew into a major city primarily because it was the largest slave market in Europe, in chances of finding a black face or even a tan one among the merchandise of 9th century Dublin were nil. Europeans also captured Eastern Europeans and sold them as slaves within Europe and to the Muslim world so there has been a time when non whites owned whites as slaves and they treated them the same as whites treated non white slaves in the colonial Caribbean.

Turkish elites especially prized 10 to 14 year old boys ( which is odd because in most slave holding societies attractive adolescent females; skilled slaves, people like carpenters, stone masons, weavers, gladiators; literate slaves, roman and middle eastern aristocrats wanted to save money but with haggling and counting money considered undignified for their social rank educated slaves fetched a high price and finally male slaves, who were 16 to 25 good a higher price than younger male because they were at the beginning of their physical prime for manual labor. The word "Turk" has been, until very recently, strongly associated with forced sodomy of someone of the same gender. When those white slave boys where not being "given" another man's genitalia, they often times had their taken by blade so they could be Eunuchs in the harem of a rich man where he kept white women naked and at his sexual beck and call for all of her life until such time that she was too old for the man’s taste and would be sold to a brothel.

People like Barber pirates, from North Africa and Tartars from central Asia decided to cut out the European Middle man and do what White were never able to do in Sub Saharan Africa, sail to the coast of Northern Europe and land and capture slaves en masse and return to the Islamic World and sell these very pale white slaves from Ireland, Iceland and other Northern and Western European places to customers of all hues. Literally millions of Europeans were captured either by Barbary pirates, Arab pirates in the Mediterranean, Turks in South Eastern Europe and Central Asians and became slaves of non whites and even more Europeans have been slaves at the hand s of other Europeans.


Many scholars and people who read scholarly works want to make slavery synonymous or even exclusive to the last five centuries of European colonial history, because it was a time where Europeans primarily enslaved non Europeans (although Europeans still took other Europeans as slaves legally in Eastern Europe until the 19th century in some areas. In Czarist Russia, most people were serfs, which is virtually the same status as being a slave) and because the Europeans became the primary buyers of slaves, on balance during that time period.

I say “on balance
 
This entry is especially lengthy. It is mostly focused on history and not economics or politics or the policy debates of the moment. In my next few columns I will get to that. This article covers a variety of things, it starts with a history of West Africa and moves to a history of Slavery and then moves to the way some scholars have missed the main lesson of slavery because they have an agenda and finally it ends with something making what is otherwise an article about history, relevant to some of the present day policy debates. It probably the equivalent to six or seven pages in a magazine so I suggest that if you read it, set aside a little bit of time, maybe get some coffee and if you please, would you kindly give me some feed back.

I look forward to debating with the smart folks on this board who will probably read my article but I would be much obliged if you could give some feed back on the style as well as the actual content. I have been giving some serious thought to a career as journalist and I am going to use my semi monthly column as a test of sorts as well as a way to entertain and maybe inform, a community that has done a good deal of both.

I was initially going to respond to someone's comments in a recent thread about slavery, where some people recited the narrative that never in history have white people been enslaved, let alone by non whites. That is not the case. Before 1700 any society that existed or had existed had slaves and had people from that society who were slaves. Even if an entire people were never conquered and enslaved, people within the society would almost always be sold as slaves in exchange for food during times of famine or to settle a debt. Because our society has, thankfully, come to the realization that slavery is evil, some non whites, when presented with this very fact, in essence the challenge to that narrative stating that slavery is a uniquely white sin, become upset when they should not become upset, they should feel empowered. The fact that non whites have conquered others, including whites, and enslaved them shows that we all have the same brains, the same brains with the same natural impulses, for better or for worse, we all have the same impulses and the same capacity for good and for evil with all of us. While the narrative that slavery is something done exclusively by whites to non whites makes non whites, especially blacks, seem noble it often times goes hand in glove with that other narrative that is also, unfortunately a part of the World view of far too many, that blacks are savages, noble savages perhaps but savages nonetheless.

Many blacks with whom I have studied or discussed history or current events, upon learning about just how much blacks conquered other blacks, how they struggled for political power within their own polities (palace murder and intrigue are not just the domain of Shakespeare, how they wanted to obtain as much wealth as possible and were capable of being overtaken by jealousy and vanity and rage, actually feel empowered because if their brains work exactly the same way Europeans brains do they must also posses all of the positive qualities contained in the brains of Whites, Asians and everyone else whose culture had obtained a higher level of technological sophistication.

Anyone who engages in modern scholarship of social science knows that African societies’ development was severally impeded by geography and that European, North African and Asian cultural development was accelerated by the forces of geography (read Guns, Germs and Steel for a very detailed but fun and enjoyable to read explanation of geography and how it shaped history). Considering that Eurasian culture was able to advance because Eurasian geography favored farming, specialization, literacy and the ability for crops and technology to move eastward and westward from its place of origin, any given society in Europe or Asia got the majority of its useful ideas from other parts of Eurasia.

With Eurasia being the first place where people farmed (owing to the fact that a majority of agriculturally useful plants are native to Eurasia and all but one of the 14 species of large mammals that can be domesticated are native to the land mass) as well its being a roughly 8,000 mile long and 800 mile wide zone of arable land, coastline, natural harbor and inlets and navigable rivers, ideas not only moves quickly but it was home to the majority of humanity. West African societies were almost entirely cut off from Eurasia and its pool of shared ideas, West Africa’s population comprising less than a twentieth of humanity, it is partially cut off from other West Africans and almost entirely cutoff from Eastern and Southern Africans, Western African societies nonetheless reached, on their own, sophisticated states, agriculture, mining and metal working that put them on par technologically with the Ancient Greeks and Romans in many respects.

While writing did not come to West Africa until it was introduced by foreigners (as was the way writing was obtained for all but three societies to have ever existed) there is no history of what undoubtly took place, an ethnic group or collection of similar ethnic groups, surrounded to the South and West by Ocean and constrained by the vast Desert to their North, expanded Eastward.

Without a written history, the series of conquests and displacement of Africans by other Africans is hard to precisely date and chronicle as is the case with Iron age conflicts in Europe and Asia. Luckily, Archeology and Particular distribution of linguistic and ethnic groups in Africa paint a picture of Iron age farming societies forging iron weapons, forming militia groups at minimum and more likely small armies and killing, enslaving and taking the land of the hunter-gather societies to the East and the South. These conquerors, collectively known as the Bantu, brought with them a common language and over time and through Africa's isolation inducing geographies hundreds of languages and dialects have emerged in a band that bends from the Ivory Coast, around the jungles, through Serengeti plains and down to much of Southern Africa.

This band avoids the dense jungles of the Congo, the Kalahari Desert and the Mediterranean climate on the tip of Africa. The shape of this empire of sorts was based whether or not the land could support their staple crops, yams and cassava and other starchy, energy rich tubers that allowed them the ability to become farmers. Those crops grow well on the savannah and require heavy monsoonal rain in order to thrive and the densest jungles, deserts and even semi arid climates are unsuitable for their crops. The Twi (known largely as pygmies) and the Khosan people (known widely as the bushmen of the Kalahari) look very different from the dark skinned Bantu people and speak completely unrelated languages. Both groups probably lived in a much larger area than they do today but by the time of European exploration and conquest those people had been confined to an forever associated with the Densest Jungles of the Congo and with the Driest portion of the Kalahari Desert. Testing of paternal lines and linguistic analysis show that in some areas Bantu blood and dialects, all originally from the Ivory Coast region, make up the population and languages as far south as South Africa, Shaka Zulu was Bantu for example and he lived in what is now South Africa and his iron weapons were as sharp and as deadly as the weapons welded by a Roman Legionnaire or a Greek Hoplite. In other places, the populations were mixed to a degree showing that some Bantu might have taken Twi and Khosan women as slaves and had children with them. Perhaps as far back as circa 1,000 BC, armies of ebony skinned explorers and conquerors did with their razor sharp and deadly Iqwah swords what pale skinned explorers and conquers did 25 centuries later in the Americas, found people on land they wanted and killed most, raped and mixed with some and pushed the rest into the land that was economically undesirable.

What all of this means is that when given the opportunity black people, African people will look to expand beyond their homeland, they will seek wealth, they will seek better opportunities, they were able to build an iron age society out of Mesolithic (nomadic hunters and gathers who worked with stone tools and had no knowledge of farming or metal working) on their own (something no other society can claim to have done) and they used their superior weapons granted to them by their own innovation and their force of number made possible by growing crops to and the ability to raise armies that can only happen with farming as farming is needed to have specialists who do not have to far and can train to fight and lead armies and collect taxes needed to build and maintain those forces under arms.

The image of Africans running with spears and with loin cloths from lions is simply not real, some time , perhaps around the time of Rome's founding there were Africans in loin cloths running but not from lions. they were running from two legged predators and instead fearing the tooth or claw or horn of an animal they feared the iron blade of the most fearsome animal of all. I think that the image of a Bantu warrior chasing down a Twi or Khosan man in order to kill him and to rape his wife and daughters and to enslave his sons, although brutal do much more to combat all of those ghosts of Blumenbach that haunt the collective psyche of even those who want to portray Africa in a positive way. If you want to give true dignity to people who had been conquered and subjugated by you or those like you by imagining the conquered as noble savages, or as simple yet vibrant people or the other condescending terms used by those sympathetic to African and other non Western nations.

Before moving into the broader issue of slavery, I will transition by mentioning a fact with which most of you who are still reading by this point are familiar. Africans enslaved other Africans and most slaves chained together and shipped like animal across the Middle Passage where actually captured by other Africans. Unfortunately this fact is usually used as an attempt to downplay the brutality of the slavery that existed within the "Triangle of Trade," or if not to minimize the intent is to spread the blame around and off of the white slave traders. Whether or not the slave trader captured the Africans or not changes nothing about the guilt or European slave traders and severity of the Middle Passage.

What ought to be changed by the reality of Africans being the primary catchers of slaves, is the perception of Europeans as omnipotent, Europeans from 1450 to 1850 were unable to break into the interior of Africa because they would be resisted by Iron weapons wielding warriors whose numbers could negate the slight advantage afforded to smooth bore, single shot muzzle loaded muskets. It would take Repeating rifles, Gatling guns and, most importantly the geographically induced isolation on the continental scale and political fragmentation on a local scale. Africa, all of it south of the Sahara was never able to form a nation state, there were some kingdom and some very rich men like Mansa Musa but without any powerful nation state, Africans were the vulnerable people, the people who were always enslaved. With the rise of Nation states in European, Africa was doomed to become the source of slaves for Europe and Middle East for several centuries but that was not always the case, in fact, for most of history there was slaver yand slaves were never taken from thousands of miles away from the places in which they would be enslaved.

Slavery was commonplace in ancient Europe, in the North and in the South, virtually all Greek and Roman philosophers considered slavery to be an unavoidable fact of life and most of those slaves were either conquered people from places like Iberia, Gaul, Southern Britannia ( what are now Spain, Portugal, France, Belgium, Switzerland, England and Wales), Greece, Anatolia (modern day turkey and at the time inhabited by people whom you would call white), Thrace and Dacia (modern day Romania) or the slaves were people who could not pay back debts so they enslaved other Italian/Romans as well.

In the middle ages, people like the Frisians specialized in capturing and selling slaves and the many Vikings found slave trading to be much more lucrative than raiding for gold and silver. The city of Dublin, for instance, grew into a major city primarily because it was the largest slave market in Europe, in chances of finding a black face or even a tan one among the merchandise of 9th century Dublin were nil. Europeans also captured Eastern Europeans and sold them as slaves within Europe and to the Muslim world so there has been a time when non whites owned whites as slaves and they treated them the same as whites treated non white slaves in the colonial Caribbean.

Turkish elites especially prized 10 to 14 year old boys ( which is odd because in most slave holding societies attractive adolescent females; skilled slaves, people like carpenters, stone masons, weavers, gladiators; literate slaves, roman and middle eastern aristocrats wanted to save money but with haggling and counting money considered undignified for their social rank educated slaves fetched a high price and finally male slaves, who were 16 to 25 good a higher price than younger male because they were at the beginning of their physical prime for manual labor. The word "Turk" has been, until very recently, strongly associated with forced sodomy of someone of the same gender. When those white slave boys where not being "given" another man's genitalia, they often times had their taken by blade so they could be Eunuchs in the harem of a rich man where he kept white women naked and at his sexual beck and call for all of her life until such time that she was too old for the man’s taste and would be sold to a brothel.

People like Barber pirates, from North Africa and Tartars from central Asia decided to cut out the European Middle man and do what White were never able to do in Sub Saharan Africa, sail to the coast of Northern Europe and land and capture slaves en masse and return to the Islamic World and sell these very pale white slaves from Ireland, Iceland and other Northern and Western European places to customers of all hues. Literally millions of Europeans were captured either by Barbary pirates, Arab pirates in the Mediterranean, Turks in South Eastern Europe and Central Asians and became slaves of non whites and even more Europeans have been slaves at the hand s of other Europeans.


Many scholars and people who read scholarly works want to make slavery synonymous or even exclusive to the last five centuries of European colonial history, because it was a time where Europeans primarily enslaved non Europeans (although Europeans still took other Europeans as slaves legally in Eastern Europe until the 19th century in some areas. In Czarist Russia, most people were serfs, which is virtually the same status as being a slave) and because the Europeans became the primary buyers of slaves, on balance during that time period.

I say “on balance
 
i'll give this a read when i get to a computer. if you become a journalist rex, please use your talents for good and not evil! thanks for the post in advance
 
i'll give this a read when i get to a computer. if you become a journalist rex, please use your talents for good and not evil! thanks for the post in advance
 
Good start to a journalism career. I see potential. A few thoughts:

a) Was this meant to be an essay, or a journalistic piece?
b) The main thematic evidenced message I took; slavery is a human condition rather than simply a racial condition. That slavery is tethered more by the human emotions of 'something for nothing', and not merely from racial sublimation. Is this correct?
c) Who is your target audience?

I thoroughly enjoyed the read, the facts, and the messages you are trying to get across. However, this did not remotely feel like a journalistic piece to me. I'm not sure if you were presenting this as an 'opinion' piece, a state of humanity style piece, or really what you were trying to go for. I think the topic is a great one, and you have a very relevant and solid viewpoint on it. I did feel at times that there were a lot of vaguely tangent concepts being used to tie together a central idea. By this I mean that the language and 'take for granted' vocabulary you used was a bit broad to really be aimed at any one audience. You mentioned in the beginning that this was not really supposed to be an economic piece, but it seemed that your most compelling evidence was all economics based. Mainly, the last two paragraphs seem to be an economic prologue rather than a necessary part of the article. Again, I think this piece is very solid. Keep up the good work.

An editor's opinions of areas to work on:
1. A thematic approach or sequence of writing to peak interest and give necessary transitions for different concepts and evidence.
2. A more uniform approach to the overall piece.
3. A little bit too wordy. Sentences all had great information but was a bit tough to really just get into that speed reading mode where you are just part of the story.
4. You have another website, like WordPress, or a blog or somewhere to read this? Reading this on Niketalk with white text and black background doesn't do it justice. It is hard to get a real sense of the paragraphs and how the article should really come out. I think it's good idea to post it on here too, but would like to re-read it in a more 'normal' setting.

Look forward to future editions Mr. Kent
 
Good start to a journalism career. I see potential. A few thoughts:

a) Was this meant to be an essay, or a journalistic piece?
b) The main thematic evidenced message I took; slavery is a human condition rather than simply a racial condition. That slavery is tethered more by the human emotions of 'something for nothing', and not merely from racial sublimation. Is this correct?
c) Who is your target audience?

I thoroughly enjoyed the read, the facts, and the messages you are trying to get across. However, this did not remotely feel like a journalistic piece to me. I'm not sure if you were presenting this as an 'opinion' piece, a state of humanity style piece, or really what you were trying to go for. I think the topic is a great one, and you have a very relevant and solid viewpoint on it. I did feel at times that there were a lot of vaguely tangent concepts being used to tie together a central idea. By this I mean that the language and 'take for granted' vocabulary you used was a bit broad to really be aimed at any one audience. You mentioned in the beginning that this was not really supposed to be an economic piece, but it seemed that your most compelling evidence was all economics based. Mainly, the last two paragraphs seem to be an economic prologue rather than a necessary part of the article. Again, I think this piece is very solid. Keep up the good work.

An editor's opinions of areas to work on:
1. A thematic approach or sequence of writing to peak interest and give necessary transitions for different concepts and evidence.
2. A more uniform approach to the overall piece.
3. A little bit too wordy. Sentences all had great information but was a bit tough to really just get into that speed reading mode where you are just part of the story.
4. You have another website, like WordPress, or a blog or somewhere to read this? Reading this on Niketalk with white text and black background doesn't do it justice. It is hard to get a real sense of the paragraphs and how the article should really come out. I think it's good idea to post it on here too, but would like to re-read it in a more 'normal' setting.

Look forward to future editions Mr. Kent
 
Not bad, sir.
Slave economies can be profitable for a small elite but overall, even the majority of free people (and obviously the slaves) have very little because labor that is not free does not produce (this is not just categorical, it is at the margin, taxation is essentially a weakened form of slavery but it is still the extraction of the fruits of one’s own labor through the threat of force) very efficiently because innovation, initiative and investment are discouraged (There is little reason to be creative in new ways to produce or to take risks in order to produce more or to defer income and other satisfaction for future productivity when those gains will all be taken by the slave owner, lord or tax collector).



Slavery really isn't profitable or efficient. Try forcing people to do work without pay, compared to paying people who do get paid and have better technological advances doesn't compare. Slavery in this country was already being eradicated even before the Civil War. Technological advances had already begun to a point where slave owners were losing their plantations and going out of business because other farmers in the North and also the South made those advances where it wasn't profitable to even have slaves.


Slavery and Capitalism cannot coexist. It's impossible. waits for some Socialist, Fascist, Marxist, Kenyesian to say otherwise.
 
Not bad, sir.
Slave economies can be profitable for a small elite but overall, even the majority of free people (and obviously the slaves) have very little because labor that is not free does not produce (this is not just categorical, it is at the margin, taxation is essentially a weakened form of slavery but it is still the extraction of the fruits of one’s own labor through the threat of force) very efficiently because innovation, initiative and investment are discouraged (There is little reason to be creative in new ways to produce or to take risks in order to produce more or to defer income and other satisfaction for future productivity when those gains will all be taken by the slave owner, lord or tax collector).



Slavery really isn't profitable or efficient. Try forcing people to do work without pay, compared to paying people who do get paid and have better technological advances doesn't compare. Slavery in this country was already being eradicated even before the Civil War. Technological advances had already begun to a point where slave owners were losing their plantations and going out of business because other farmers in the North and also the South made those advances where it wasn't profitable to even have slaves.


Slavery and Capitalism cannot coexist. It's impossible. waits for some Socialist, Fascist, Marxist, Kenyesian to say otherwise.
 
Sundizzle wrote:
Good start to a journalism career. I see potential. A few thoughts:

a) Was this meant to be an essay, or a journalistic piece?
b) The main thematic evidenced message I took; slavery is a human condition rather than simply a racial condition. That slavery is tethered more by the human emotions of 'something for nothing', and not merely from racial sublimation. Is this correct?
c) Who is your target audience?

I thoroughly enjoyed the read, the facts, and the messages you are trying to get across. However, this did not remotely feel like a journalistic piece to me. I'm not sure if you were presenting this as an 'opinion' piece, a state of humanity style piece, or really what you were trying to go for. I think the topic is a great one, and you have a very relevant and solid viewpoint on it. I did feel at times that there were a lot of vaguely tangent concepts being used to tie together a central idea. By this I mean that the language and 'take for granted' vocabulary you used was a bit broad to really be aimed at any one audience. You mentioned in the beginning that this was not really supposed to be an economic piece, but it seemed that your most compelling evidence was all economics based. Mainly, the last two paragraphs seem to be an economic prologue rather than a necessary part of the article. Again, I think this piece is very solid. Keep up the good work.

An editor's opinions of areas to work on:
1. A thematic approach or sequence of writing to peak interest and give necessary transitions for different concepts and evidence.
2. A more uniform approach to the overall piece.
3. A little bit too wordy. Sentences all had great information but was a bit tough to really just get into that speed reading mode where you are just part of the story.
4. You have another website, like WordPress, or a blog or somewhere to read this? Reading this on Niketalk with white text and black background doesn't do it justice. It is hard to get a real sense of the paragraphs and how the article should really come out. I think it's good idea to post it on here too, but would like to re-read it in a more 'normal' setting.

Look forward to future editions Mr. Kent

a.) This piece was more so an essay, in one or two weeks I am going to try more for a true column with about 500 words only
b.) In retrospect I wish I had been clearer about the message. People always want something for nothing, and it is up to us as society to set the rules for how people satiate that greed. Far too often societies have considered it acceptable, even honorable to live off of the labor of everyone else, hence the term nobleman or gentleman bein gused to refer to someone who does no labor whatsoever.
c.) My target audience for now are the few people who will read the piece, in the future I will make them shorter so hopefully more people will read it. I suppose if I could pick a target audience it would be people 22 to 50, college graduates, libertarian leaning people, and people who read magazines like The Economist and columnists like George Will.

In the future if I have so much material that I want to get out I might do what Thomas Sowell does and make a a two, three or four part piece and reelase one each day for consecutive days. I want to not just do economics because there are so many people with more credentials and experience who blog on the subject, I want to blend history, philosophy and political theory and policy in order to find some sort of very discrete niche but obviously that can be challenging. I agree with you that the syntax was too cumbersome, I am a big fan of George Will and I do not want to tone down the vocab because I think that sometimes people like to learn new words in context or have an excuse to look up a word or two that they just do not know. My syntax needs to be simplified though. I also love Walter Williams Thomas Sowell's columns and they are both very plain spoken in their columns.

Thank you for that input and the numbered list of things to work on, I'll try to have one done within a week and two weeks max and do it in a more compact and unified way.
 
Sundizzle wrote:
Good start to a journalism career. I see potential. A few thoughts:

a) Was this meant to be an essay, or a journalistic piece?
b) The main thematic evidenced message I took; slavery is a human condition rather than simply a racial condition. That slavery is tethered more by the human emotions of 'something for nothing', and not merely from racial sublimation. Is this correct?
c) Who is your target audience?

I thoroughly enjoyed the read, the facts, and the messages you are trying to get across. However, this did not remotely feel like a journalistic piece to me. I'm not sure if you were presenting this as an 'opinion' piece, a state of humanity style piece, or really what you were trying to go for. I think the topic is a great one, and you have a very relevant and solid viewpoint on it. I did feel at times that there were a lot of vaguely tangent concepts being used to tie together a central idea. By this I mean that the language and 'take for granted' vocabulary you used was a bit broad to really be aimed at any one audience. You mentioned in the beginning that this was not really supposed to be an economic piece, but it seemed that your most compelling evidence was all economics based. Mainly, the last two paragraphs seem to be an economic prologue rather than a necessary part of the article. Again, I think this piece is very solid. Keep up the good work.

An editor's opinions of areas to work on:
1. A thematic approach or sequence of writing to peak interest and give necessary transitions for different concepts and evidence.
2. A more uniform approach to the overall piece.
3. A little bit too wordy. Sentences all had great information but was a bit tough to really just get into that speed reading mode where you are just part of the story.
4. You have another website, like WordPress, or a blog or somewhere to read this? Reading this on Niketalk with white text and black background doesn't do it justice. It is hard to get a real sense of the paragraphs and how the article should really come out. I think it's good idea to post it on here too, but would like to re-read it in a more 'normal' setting.

Look forward to future editions Mr. Kent

a.) This piece was more so an essay, in one or two weeks I am going to try more for a true column with about 500 words only
b.) In retrospect I wish I had been clearer about the message. People always want something for nothing, and it is up to us as society to set the rules for how people satiate that greed. Far too often societies have considered it acceptable, even honorable to live off of the labor of everyone else, hence the term nobleman or gentleman bein gused to refer to someone who does no labor whatsoever.
c.) My target audience for now are the few people who will read the piece, in the future I will make them shorter so hopefully more people will read it. I suppose if I could pick a target audience it would be people 22 to 50, college graduates, libertarian leaning people, and people who read magazines like The Economist and columnists like George Will.

In the future if I have so much material that I want to get out I might do what Thomas Sowell does and make a a two, three or four part piece and reelase one each day for consecutive days. I want to not just do economics because there are so many people with more credentials and experience who blog on the subject, I want to blend history, philosophy and political theory and policy in order to find some sort of very discrete niche but obviously that can be challenging. I agree with you that the syntax was too cumbersome, I am a big fan of George Will and I do not want to tone down the vocab because I think that sometimes people like to learn new words in context or have an excuse to look up a word or two that they just do not know. My syntax needs to be simplified though. I also love Walter Williams Thomas Sowell's columns and they are both very plain spoken in their columns.

Thank you for that input and the numbered list of things to work on, I'll try to have one done within a week and two weeks max and do it in a more compact and unified way.
 
Well done.

No doubt slavery existed long before the trans Atlantic slave trade. Historian Richard Spall has demonstrated that Arab slave trade in Africa was so pervasive, it resulted in a population imbalance on the African continent . Arab slave merchants, with their penchant for young docile female slaves, had so depleted the stock of women on the continent, that there was a surplus of able bodied men. It was this surplus that was shipped, initially to the sugarcane fields of the America's , and then further up north to cotton fields of Southeastern USA, to perform the hard labor that cotton and sugar production entailed.

Neither is slavery solely the domain of Africans and European . . that is to say, the dynamics of slavery extend beyond white slave traders/owners, and black slaves:
Cicero, writing to his friend, Atticus, said "the stupidest and ugliest slaves come from Britain." Later they were the salves of the Normans. "
Palgrave, an English historian says of the Anglo Saxon period: "The Theowe (Anglo Saxon slave) was entirely the property of his master, body as well as labor; like the Negro, he was part of the live stock, ranking in use and value with beasts of the plough." Thus demonstrating that the idea of slaves as chattel is far older than the trans - Atl. slave trade.
Until the 16th C., England employed a system of villenage feudalism that wouldn't permit slaves to buy their freedom. Serfdom was not abolished in Prussia (not to be confused with Russia) until 1807, and Austria until 1848.
The US also had its share of white, predominantly Irish, but also E. European slaves. According to JA Rogers Abraham Lincoln's ancestors were rumored to be white slaves (J.A. Rogers). According to Cigrand, Grover Cleveland's great grandfather Richard Falley was an Irish slave from CT.
White people were also held as slaves in Africa. Read the work of Abbe Busnot who was sent by Louis XIV to Mulai Ismael (Moroccan leader) to negotiate for the freedom of white French slaves in the 17th C. As late as 1815, there were white Americans enslaved in Sudan who were only freed thanks to the efforts of Commodore Decateur under the behest of Pres. Madison. Our Library of Congress has numerous books written by white ex-slaves. Little reported is the fact that "Negroes bought White people as slaves in this country as late as 1818" (Rogers)

I'd like to share with you a passage I came across two nights ago whilst reading a little Durant, who, in describing the emergence of slavery, wrote:

"The rise of agriculture and the inequality of men led to the employment of the socially weak by the socially strong; not till then did it occur to the victor in war that the only good prisoner is a live one. Butchery and cannibalism lessened, slavery grew. `010244 It was a
great moral improvement when men ceased to kill or eat their fellowmen, and merely made them slaves. A similar development on a
larger scale may be seen today, when a nation victorious in war no longer exterminates the enemy, but enslaves it with indemnities.
Once slavery had been established and had proved profitable, it was extended by condemning to it defaulting debtors and obstinate
criminals, and by raids undertaken specifically to capture slaves. War helped to make slavery, and slavery helped to make war.
Probably it was through centuries of slavery that our race acquired its traditions and habits of toil. No one would do any hard
or persistent work if he could avoid it without physical, economic or social penalty. Slavery became part of the discipline by which
man was prepared for industry. Indirectly it furthered civilization, in so far as it increased wealth and- for a minority- created leisure.
After some centuries men took it for granted; Aristotle argued for slavery as natural and inevitable, and St. Paul gave his benediction
to what must have seemed, by his time, a divinely ordained institution. Gradually, through agriculture and slavery, through the division
of labor and the inherent diversity of men, the comparative equality of natural society was replaced by inequality and class divisions. "In
the primitive group we find as a rule no distinction between slave and free, no serfdom, no caste, and little if any distinction between
chief and followers." `010245 Slowly the increasing complexity of tools and trades subjected the unskilled or weak to the skilled or
strong; every invention was a new weapon in the hands of the strong, and further strengthened them in their mastery and use of the
weak. *01012 Inheritance added superior opportunity to superior possessions, and stratified once homogeneous societies into a maze
of classes and castes. Rich and poor became disruptively conscious of wealth and poverty; the class war began to run as a red thread
through all history; and the state arose as an indispensable instrument for the regulation of classes, the protection of property, the waging of war, and the organization of peace."

- Will Durant, The Story of Civilization, Volume I
 
Well done.

No doubt slavery existed long before the trans Atlantic slave trade. Historian Richard Spall has demonstrated that Arab slave trade in Africa was so pervasive, it resulted in a population imbalance on the African continent . Arab slave merchants, with their penchant for young docile female slaves, had so depleted the stock of women on the continent, that there was a surplus of able bodied men. It was this surplus that was shipped, initially to the sugarcane fields of the America's , and then further up north to cotton fields of Southeastern USA, to perform the hard labor that cotton and sugar production entailed.

Neither is slavery solely the domain of Africans and European . . that is to say, the dynamics of slavery extend beyond white slave traders/owners, and black slaves:
Cicero, writing to his friend, Atticus, said "the stupidest and ugliest slaves come from Britain." Later they were the salves of the Normans. "
Palgrave, an English historian says of the Anglo Saxon period: "The Theowe (Anglo Saxon slave) was entirely the property of his master, body as well as labor; like the Negro, he was part of the live stock, ranking in use and value with beasts of the plough." Thus demonstrating that the idea of slaves as chattel is far older than the trans - Atl. slave trade.
Until the 16th C., England employed a system of villenage feudalism that wouldn't permit slaves to buy their freedom. Serfdom was not abolished in Prussia (not to be confused with Russia) until 1807, and Austria until 1848.
The US also had its share of white, predominantly Irish, but also E. European slaves. According to JA Rogers Abraham Lincoln's ancestors were rumored to be white slaves (J.A. Rogers). According to Cigrand, Grover Cleveland's great grandfather Richard Falley was an Irish slave from CT.
White people were also held as slaves in Africa. Read the work of Abbe Busnot who was sent by Louis XIV to Mulai Ismael (Moroccan leader) to negotiate for the freedom of white French slaves in the 17th C. As late as 1815, there were white Americans enslaved in Sudan who were only freed thanks to the efforts of Commodore Decateur under the behest of Pres. Madison. Our Library of Congress has numerous books written by white ex-slaves. Little reported is the fact that "Negroes bought White people as slaves in this country as late as 1818" (Rogers)

I'd like to share with you a passage I came across two nights ago whilst reading a little Durant, who, in describing the emergence of slavery, wrote:

"The rise of agriculture and the inequality of men led to the employment of the socially weak by the socially strong; not till then did it occur to the victor in war that the only good prisoner is a live one. Butchery and cannibalism lessened, slavery grew. `010244 It was a
great moral improvement when men ceased to kill or eat their fellowmen, and merely made them slaves. A similar development on a
larger scale may be seen today, when a nation victorious in war no longer exterminates the enemy, but enslaves it with indemnities.
Once slavery had been established and had proved profitable, it was extended by condemning to it defaulting debtors and obstinate
criminals, and by raids undertaken specifically to capture slaves. War helped to make slavery, and slavery helped to make war.
Probably it was through centuries of slavery that our race acquired its traditions and habits of toil. No one would do any hard
or persistent work if he could avoid it without physical, economic or social penalty. Slavery became part of the discipline by which
man was prepared for industry. Indirectly it furthered civilization, in so far as it increased wealth and- for a minority- created leisure.
After some centuries men took it for granted; Aristotle argued for slavery as natural and inevitable, and St. Paul gave his benediction
to what must have seemed, by his time, a divinely ordained institution. Gradually, through agriculture and slavery, through the division
of labor and the inherent diversity of men, the comparative equality of natural society was replaced by inequality and class divisions. "In
the primitive group we find as a rule no distinction between slave and free, no serfdom, no caste, and little if any distinction between
chief and followers." `010245 Slowly the increasing complexity of tools and trades subjected the unskilled or weak to the skilled or
strong; every invention was a new weapon in the hands of the strong, and further strengthened them in their mastery and use of the
weak. *01012 Inheritance added superior opportunity to superior possessions, and stratified once homogeneous societies into a maze
of classes and castes. Rich and poor became disruptively conscious of wealth and poverty; the class war began to run as a red thread
through all history; and the state arose as an indispensable instrument for the regulation of classes, the protection of property, the waging of war, and the organization of peace."

- Will Durant, The Story of Civilization, Volume I
 
Excellent. 
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I'll be reading this over breakfast tomorrow morning. Always enjoy reading your posts, Rex. 
 
I'll read when I have some free time in a bit, as well as looking forward to reading your future work.

Being a history major myself I always try to broaden my knowledge or reinforce areas I wish to strengthen. Great work from what I've read so far.
 
I'll read when I have some free time in a bit, as well as looking forward to reading your future work.

Being a history major myself I always try to broaden my knowledge or reinforce areas I wish to strengthen. Great work from what I've read so far.
 
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