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I recorded me spitting a couple bars over my mans beat. Tell me what you think.Thanks.
SO tell me what you think
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I recorded me spitting a couple bars over my mans beat. Tell me what you think.Thanks.
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Pretty good above decent
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Pretty good above decent
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Here are the lyrics written out, in case some lines are hard to hear.
Yo, I am Philly L n***a, I came to do it bigger
Than my predecessors, in the other eras, cause I’m better
No disrespect to the legends, they was trendsetters
But my flow’s wetter, eat n****s I’m a young Lecter
Call beats Hector, cause Achilles(I kill these)
With ease, I spit flames, watch the micphone steam
An I’ma champion n***a like Mike’s old team
I’m on my red bull *%#%, cause my flow got wings
It’s crazy, I’m already MVP seems
But I’m only twenty so I’m still green
They say hip-hop died, victim to corporate greed
But I am hip-hop and n***a, I still breath
So please, dead the noise and just, let me lead
To the Pax Hip-Hopa like the time of Big Poppa
Rest in peace to Big Pop but not to hip-hop
An yo I can’t stop, till my destinies fulfilled
In the bible it was willed
In the book of revelations, a prophet will arise and his name
will be Phil
Be blessed by my words cause the s***s is so ill and real
I rhyme daily to hone all my skills
An breath exercises is part of my drills
An I battle on the regular, send lyrics to your jugular
Kill you with my wordplay, dead you with my similes, end you with my metaphors
Something’s gotten into me
Really b, when I rhyme n***a I’m in rare form
Zoned out in the sky n****a like I’m airborne
An I on that drug s**t, I’m just on another level
Keep getting higher too cause Philly L will never settle
Never reach a plateau, unlimited abilities
Stormin through the game and like Katrina ya’ll gon deal with me
Flow sick, quarantine, these rappers ain nearing me, they fearin me
But I’m everywhere like the air you breath
Rap is some *%#% now, I’m the change that the game needs
An once I claim the game I ain letting go, I’m stingy
Failed kindergarten, I don’t know how to share, feel me?
Philly, fixed the whole game I cannot lose
Zoned out in the booth n***a like I got booze
Let me heart and soul bleed dude, like I got bruised
Rhymin for a minute son, redefined grammar school
Only lil n***a had the teachers all sayin “oooh
Yo, I am Philly L n***a, I came to do it bigger
Than my predecessors, in the other eras, cause I’m better
No disrespect to the legends, they was trendsetters
But my flow’s wetter, eat n****s I’m a young Lecter
Call beats Hector, cause Achilles(I kill these)
With ease, I spit flames, watch the micphone steam
An I’ma champion n***a like Mike’s old team
I’m on my red bull *%#%, cause my flow got wings
It’s crazy, I’m already MVP seems
But I’m only twenty so I’m still green
They say hip-hop died, victim to corporate greed
But I am hip-hop and n***a, I still breath
So please, dead the noise and just, let me lead
To the Pax Hip-Hopa like the time of Big Poppa
Rest in peace to Big Pop but not to hip-hop
An yo I can’t stop, till my destinies fulfilled
In the bible it was willed
In the book of revelations, a prophet will arise and his name
will be Phil
Be blessed by my words cause the s***s is so ill and real
I rhyme daily to hone all my skills
An breath exercises is part of my drills
An I battle on the regular, send lyrics to your jugular
Kill you with my wordplay, dead you with my similes, end you with my metaphors
Something’s gotten into me
Really b, when I rhyme n***a I’m in rare form
Zoned out in the sky n****a like I’m airborne
An I on that drug s**t, I’m just on another level
Keep getting higher too cause Philly L will never settle
Never reach a plateau, unlimited abilities
Stormin through the game and like Katrina ya’ll gon deal with me
Flow sick, quarantine, these rappers ain nearing me, they fearin me
But I’m everywhere like the air you breath
Rap is some *%#% now, I’m the change that the game needs
An once I claim the game I ain letting go, I’m stingy
Failed kindergarten, I don’t know how to share, feel me?
Philly, fixed the whole game I cannot lose
Zoned out in the booth n***a like I got booze
Let me heart and soul bleed dude, like I got bruised
Rhymin for a minute son, redefined grammar school
Only lil n***a had the teachers all sayin “oooh
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Here are the lyrics written out, in case some lines are hard to hear.
Yo, I am Philly L n***a, I came to do it bigger
Than my predecessors, in the other eras, cause I’m better
No disrespect to the legends, they was trendsetters
But my flow’s wetter, eat n****s I’m a young Lecter
Call beats Hector, cause Achilles(I kill these)
With ease, I spit flames, watch the micphone steam
An I’ma champion n***a like Mike’s old team
I’m on my red bull *%#%, cause my flow got wings
It’s crazy, I’m already MVP seems
But I’m only twenty so I’m still green
They say hip-hop died, victim to corporate greed
But I am hip-hop and n***a, I still breath
So please, dead the noise and just, let me lead
To the Pax Hip-Hopa like the time of Big Poppa
Rest in peace to Big Pop but not to hip-hop
An yo I can’t stop, till my destinies fulfilled
In the bible it was willed
In the book of revelations, a prophet will arise and his name
will be Phil
Be blessed by my words cause the s***s is so ill and real
I rhyme daily to hone all my skills
An breath exercises is part of my drills
An I battle on the regular, send lyrics to your jugular
Kill you with my wordplay, dead you with my similes, end you with my metaphors
Something’s gotten into me
Really b, when I rhyme n***a I’m in rare form
Zoned out in the sky n****a like I’m airborne
An I on that drug s**t, I’m just on another level
Keep getting higher too cause Philly L will never settle
Never reach a plateau, unlimited abilities
Stormin through the game and like Katrina ya’ll gon deal with me
Flow sick, quarantine, these rappers ain nearing me, they fearin me
But I’m everywhere like the air you breath
Rap is some *%#% now, I’m the change that the game needs
An once I claim the game I ain letting go, I’m stingy
Failed kindergarten, I don’t know how to share, feel me?
Philly, fixed the whole game I cannot lose
Zoned out in the booth n***a like I got booze
Let me heart and soul bleed dude, like I got bruised
Rhymin for a minute son, redefined grammar school
Only lil n***a had the teachers all sayin “oooh
Yo, I am Philly L n***a, I came to do it bigger
Than my predecessors, in the other eras, cause I’m better
No disrespect to the legends, they was trendsetters
But my flow’s wetter, eat n****s I’m a young Lecter
Call beats Hector, cause Achilles(I kill these)
With ease, I spit flames, watch the micphone steam
An I’ma champion n***a like Mike’s old team
I’m on my red bull *%#%, cause my flow got wings
It’s crazy, I’m already MVP seems
But I’m only twenty so I’m still green
They say hip-hop died, victim to corporate greed
But I am hip-hop and n***a, I still breath
So please, dead the noise and just, let me lead
To the Pax Hip-Hopa like the time of Big Poppa
Rest in peace to Big Pop but not to hip-hop
An yo I can’t stop, till my destinies fulfilled
In the bible it was willed
In the book of revelations, a prophet will arise and his name
will be Phil
Be blessed by my words cause the s***s is so ill and real
I rhyme daily to hone all my skills
An breath exercises is part of my drills
An I battle on the regular, send lyrics to your jugular
Kill you with my wordplay, dead you with my similes, end you with my metaphors
Something’s gotten into me
Really b, when I rhyme n***a I’m in rare form
Zoned out in the sky n****a like I’m airborne
An I on that drug s**t, I’m just on another level
Keep getting higher too cause Philly L will never settle
Never reach a plateau, unlimited abilities
Stormin through the game and like Katrina ya’ll gon deal with me
Flow sick, quarantine, these rappers ain nearing me, they fearin me
But I’m everywhere like the air you breath
Rap is some *%#% now, I’m the change that the game needs
An once I claim the game I ain letting go, I’m stingy
Failed kindergarten, I don’t know how to share, feel me?
Philly, fixed the whole game I cannot lose
Zoned out in the booth n***a like I got booze
Let me heart and soul bleed dude, like I got bruised
Rhymin for a minute son, redefined grammar school
Only lil n***a had the teachers all sayin “oooh
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Never mind.
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Never mind.
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Honestly, I didn't love it, but I've heard faaar worse.
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Honestly, I didn't love it, but I've heard faaar worse.
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If your beginning and just starting, you have potential. Biggest thing imo, is to touch up your flow and delivery. Flow isnt bad but it can be more point feel me?
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If your beginning and just starting, you have potential. Biggest thing imo, is to touch up your flow and delivery. Flow isnt bad but it can be more point feel me?
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^^^^that. keep doin your thing man
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^^^^that. keep doin your thing man
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^^^^that. keep doin your thing man
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^^^^that. keep doin your thing man
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This beat sound like something to just drop a bunch of punchlines on. You should've done that instead of rapping that fast cuz I wasn't feeling the content.
But you can rap for the most part. Expressed your attitude on the track well. I'd just say choose ya next beats wisely if you gonna pursue this and work on the dopeness/potency and purpose of your rhymes.
But you can rap for the most part. Expressed your attitude on the track well. I'd just say choose ya next beats wisely if you gonna pursue this and work on the dopeness/potency and purpose of your rhymes.
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This beat sound like something to just drop a bunch of punchlines on. You should've done that instead of rapping that fast cuz I wasn't feeling the content.
But you can rap for the most part. Expressed your attitude on the track well. I'd just say choose ya next beats wisely if you gonna pursue this and work on the dopeness/potency and purpose of your rhymes.
But you can rap for the most part. Expressed your attitude on the track well. I'd just say choose ya next beats wisely if you gonna pursue this and work on the dopeness/potency and purpose of your rhymes.
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you got a voice and don't sound awkward, just gotta find your place
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you got a voice and don't sound awkward, just gotta find your place
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came in here to say this
