The Layover, check me out

[FThe45th]

taking a stab at the entrepreneurial spirit and jumped into a brand. let me know what yall think! love is welcome, hate is appreciated. just honestly want open consensus

got much more in store. no click bait. straight up, wasn't sure if it was thread worthy but, miss a 100% of the shots... so here i am & if you like heres the link

too the criticism and here’s the UPDATE !

be gentle

 

[6 Rings G.O.A.T.]

The black LA 24 t shirt..

 

[6 Rings G.O.A.T.]

What's the writing on the back?

 

[shellz]

Here’s my opinion as a prospective consumer:

1st thing, I like the Kobe logo design but,

-Fit looks a little weird on the models. Maybe look to invest in some premium materials for your shirts
-Everyone sells tee’s now but what makes yours different? What’s the story behind the brand? Maybe explain that better on the site
-I’d think about using materials other than screen print. I personally like buying t shirts that I feel will last me past a couple washes.

I respect the hustle and definitely wish you nothing but the best! Keep grinding bro.

 

[FThe45th]

What's the writing on the back?

i used google translate write kobe in Japanese

 

[6 Rings G.O.A.T.]

i used google translate write kobe in Japanese

Why?

 

[FThe45th]

Why?

not sure, wanted to give homage to Kobe and where the name came from. I guess just an english KOBE RIP was thought of, but went with this design instead. there were a few more drafts, just rolled with this.

 

[TURBO UNO]

I don’t see anything wrong with the fit or shape of the shirts. What am I missing? Anyway, I like the black LA shirt best

 

[6 Rings G.O.A.T.]

NT discount code?

 

[degenerate423]

I don’t see anything wrong with the fit or shape of the shirts. What am I missing? Anyway, I like the black LA shirt best

Looking at his IG, it looks like the tag is showing through the shirt. Maybe a thicker shirt would be better?

FThe45th

Agree with those saying use a better quality shirt. The black LA one looks nice. Any shirts with your logo on it? Maybe incorporate a plane or some layover/travel theme?

 

[aepps20]

Looks great fam. Wishing you nothing but success on this venture.

 

[FThe45th]

feedback so far has made my day. Hope yall have a great Saturday night if you're able. Be safe. Be blessed.

 

[youngwolf]

Add some sperm graphics to the back of that black shirt, and you have a winner.

 

[TURBO UNO]

Anyways....

Looking at his IG, it looks like the tag is showing through the shirt. Maybe a thicker shirt would be better?

Ahh I see, I didn’t even notice that. I remember many companies trying to do the “vintage thin” material shirts because of the old school graphics on the front but I’m assuming that’s not a thing anymore.

 

[FThe45th]

NT discount code?

for sure once i get on! id do a discount for the NT brethren

 

[jaymosenvied]

Are you going donate some of the money you make off the Kobe tees to his foundation? I like the design but profiting off his name is whack. I wish you the best though.

 

[DCAllAfrican]

The Black Kobe shirt is vicious.

The White one, not so much because the colors of the shirt makes it hard to see the white L (letter).

The "Seattle Dimes" shirt is corny.

 

[tomdiginson]

The Black Kobe shirt is vicious.

The White one, not so much because the colors of the shirt makes it hard to see the white L (letter).

The "Seattle Dimes" shirt is corny.

This. I would also remove Kobes name unless you plan on donating some of the proceeds.

 

[MetalMario]

respect my dude. already been following.

\m/

 

[FThe45th]

The Black Kobe shirt is vicious.

The White one, not so much because the colors of the shirt makes it hard to see the white L (letter).

The "Seattle Dimes" shirt is corny.

i get it that one is more for the women. Im releasing 2 shirts every other weekend.

 

[jape]

Use real models to sell your product.
Or better looking people. Not a slight at all but it really makes a difference when you are doing anything fashion related.

also better photography

 

[FThe45th]

Hope y’all like

 

[Mr Dink]

I will be buying a Kobe shirt when available.

 

[frank mucus]

I thought that shirt said lovercome until I opened the link.

 

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Midnight Cowboy tee looks nice