TIME - Steady Mobbin "Freestyle"

[notoriuswes]

lol @ dudes really taking the lines to heart.....duh he doesnt really have it

 

[young dr0]

Originally Posted by Frische Produkte

[color= rgb(255, 0, 0)]OP, although I see you get a ton of hate on here.. truthfully, I sense potential.[/color]

[color= rgb(255, 0, 0)]But:[/color]

Originally Posted by Master Zik

Your lyrics need to hit harder.

[color= rgb(255, 0, 0)]This. I want something that's gonna give me a [/color]

[color= rgb(255, 0, 0)]"Smoking in the whip, the GPS it gets confused and start +$#*%!% up the trip"[/color]

 

[golfalphabravoecho]

Very nice sir.

Good job keeping the rhyme scheme up.

I definitely like this sound better, your vocals without all those layers.

 

[CUNNiNGH4M]

good lookin out

 

[dathbgboy]

Finally gave it a listen. It was aight. Nothin that really stood as far as punches go. Beats of that tempo really aint ya niche, cuttin words short just to stay on beat

 

[CUNNiNGH4M]

ok

 

[puddinpopp]

to be honest, good try, you sound to choppy trying to stay on beat, you prolly be better suited for a slower beat...
reference a few lil b joints...no hate all honesty

 

[theblackcoltmccoy]

My _' TIME 

 

[garcia y vega]

Good %%+@ TIME 

I kinda got a request for you...could you remake that "One is The Loneliest Number" beat you made WAAAAAAY back and do a new track to it?

 

[young street86]

not bad man. im sure u have room for improvement so keep at it. i liked tht steady mobbin joint, started off iffy but u finished strong. good luck wit this rap thing.