chiefwiggum
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DO NOT GO ON IF YOU DON'T INTEND TO READ FOR %%%%.
Do we have any writers, poets on here? I write whenever my brain tells me to. I just wrote this a few days ago. It's a rap basically and a short story.
I did not want to post in the music section..it's dangerous in there. They don't even listen to music. Just muzik.
Anyway, here it is.. a lil' long..but lemme know what you think. I look forward to reading some of your stuff. Thanks yall.
Today(is the day).
Woke up early in the mornin',
as to why, i'm uncertain,
yawn and stretch, then take a few steps..
to pull back the curtain.
Feel the breeze put me at ease,
watch the trees, the falling leaves,
means..
the changing of seasons.
So, without explanation for my reasons..
I take a walk, to take a hold of this feeling.
Usually my mind's racin',
but today, I feel patient.
Right foot, left foot, a breath,
and a few more steps to no certain destination.
I let the wind just tell me where to go,
as I embark along this stroll,
the sun sparks my heart,
and I start to feel my soul,
..start to see a glow,
something so beautiful,
like I haven't seen before.
My eyes adjust, shake off the rust, now i'm lockin' in.
a few more steps and a few more breaths of the oxygen.
Now, I've been told all that glitters, it aint gold.
And to play my cards right, but i'm not about to fold.
I've only seen this kind of *@!@ in my dreams before,
I hope this is it, and not another scene of allure,
so before I take another step an inch, I pinch,
you know..just to make sure.
"Hey, hi, how you doin?
"You've got something about you, I have an interest in pursuin'
But, if you thought that line was whack..
i'll double back and keep it movin.
But before I go, just know you look so sweet,
somethin' I wanna sink my tooth in,
and i've been searchin' for years,
you look like someone I can find the truth in.
You see, i'm trying so hard to grow,
you look like someone I can dig my roots in."
Her teeth, a grin! But quickly she wiped the smile off her face.
Let's cut to the chase.
She said "Cute, but let's cut the small talk"
"You wanna know more about me?
Then you'll have to race me to the boardwalk."
A few more steps, this time a little slower.
Like a gentlemen,
I let her win.
But I kept it close,
A little cold out now,
no jacket,
my arm to her shoulder,
I had to attach it.
I could feel the warmth in my ventricles,
her heartbeat and mine..
they were identicle.
i'm usually good with words,
but she's got something I can't define.
The type of eyes that send signs of shivers down my spine.
Knowing this is it, I can't rewind.
I say "Finally someone not see-through..
that I can see INTO.
If you're not the one, you are the stencil.
With you i'm able to recline.
Your face erased the clouds of doubt in my mind,
like the butt-end of a pencil.
I bet you're equipped with lips,
which form a kiss that's just lethal"
to pass the time, I pull the Casper line..
"Can I keep you?"
She pushed off, but with another grin.
We lock eyes for a second,
I notice the triangle of beauty marks on her chin.
If you want to hold my hand,
then you'll race me to the sand."
Damn, this girl is too smart.
Here we go again, I let her get the head start.
The whole time running all I could think about was..
how I thought love was a dead art.
All that changed when we reached the sand.
Hand in hand, love?
I knew her fingertips created it.
But my mind began cluttering when she spoke the words,
"I can only stay a bit"
Damn. Did I lose another to stuttering or smothering?
In doubt, I remained cool.
With our hands we built a castle,
in case anyone attacked, we built a moat.
If they came on boat for the battle,
a turret where our knights shot arrows.
We had all of the defenses.
Unlike most girls..
she had no walls to get through,
barriers, or even fences.
The fact that her heart allowed me entrance,
rendered me defense-less.
From knight time, to night time, the moonlight shine.
I knew all I want is this.
A cloud over the moon, but when it passed..
a perfect kiss.
All the birds sang, and out jumped the fish..
a black panther in the woods raised his fist.
This is what I want..
Time stopped.
We fell asleep by the ocean.
The alarm clock..
"Oh, no it's time to go" and
then she got up,
gave me a kiss on my cheek,
then moved her mouth to speak..
"I've got to go before the sun rise"
Now, with a frown upon my face,
"You don't even have time for just oooone more race?"
Another grin, perhaps her last.
Fear in my mind, not ready to leave her in my past.
"If you aren't the one, you are the stencil"
before she disappeared she said..
"Listen I was just the beauty that's within you"
A few more steps and then she vanished,
I remained cool, a sudden sense of security
removed the would be, panic.
I look ahead at the waves of the sea,
and sit happily because..
I know there's better days ahead of me.
DO NOT GO ON IF YOU DON'T INTEND TO READ FOR %%%%.
Do we have any writers, poets on here? I write whenever my brain tells me to. I just wrote this a few days ago. It's a rap basically and a short story.
I did not want to post in the music section..it's dangerous in there. They don't even listen to music. Just muzik.
Anyway, here it is.. a lil' long..but lemme know what you think. I look forward to reading some of your stuff. Thanks yall.
Today(is the day).
Woke up early in the mornin',
as to why, i'm uncertain,
yawn and stretch, then take a few steps..
to pull back the curtain.
Feel the breeze put me at ease,
watch the trees, the falling leaves,
means..
the changing of seasons.
So, without explanation for my reasons..
I take a walk, to take a hold of this feeling.
Usually my mind's racin',
but today, I feel patient.
Right foot, left foot, a breath,
and a few more steps to no certain destination.
I let the wind just tell me where to go,
as I embark along this stroll,
the sun sparks my heart,
and I start to feel my soul,
..start to see a glow,
something so beautiful,
like I haven't seen before.
My eyes adjust, shake off the rust, now i'm lockin' in.
a few more steps and a few more breaths of the oxygen.
Now, I've been told all that glitters, it aint gold.
And to play my cards right, but i'm not about to fold.
I've only seen this kind of *@!@ in my dreams before,
I hope this is it, and not another scene of allure,
so before I take another step an inch, I pinch,
you know..just to make sure.
"Hey, hi, how you doin?
"You've got something about you, I have an interest in pursuin'
But, if you thought that line was whack..
i'll double back and keep it movin.
But before I go, just know you look so sweet,
somethin' I wanna sink my tooth in,
and i've been searchin' for years,
you look like someone I can find the truth in.
You see, i'm trying so hard to grow,
you look like someone I can dig my roots in."
Her teeth, a grin! But quickly she wiped the smile off her face.
Let's cut to the chase.
She said "Cute, but let's cut the small talk"
"You wanna know more about me?
Then you'll have to race me to the boardwalk."
A few more steps, this time a little slower.
Like a gentlemen,
I let her win.
But I kept it close,
A little cold out now,
no jacket,
my arm to her shoulder,
I had to attach it.
I could feel the warmth in my ventricles,
her heartbeat and mine..
they were identicle.
i'm usually good with words,
but she's got something I can't define.
The type of eyes that send signs of shivers down my spine.
Knowing this is it, I can't rewind.
I say "Finally someone not see-through..
that I can see INTO.
If you're not the one, you are the stencil.
With you i'm able to recline.
Your face erased the clouds of doubt in my mind,
like the butt-end of a pencil.
I bet you're equipped with lips,
which form a kiss that's just lethal"
to pass the time, I pull the Casper line..
"Can I keep you?"
She pushed off, but with another grin.
We lock eyes for a second,
I notice the triangle of beauty marks on her chin.
If you want to hold my hand,
then you'll race me to the sand."
Damn, this girl is too smart.
Here we go again, I let her get the head start.
The whole time running all I could think about was..
how I thought love was a dead art.
All that changed when we reached the sand.
Hand in hand, love?
I knew her fingertips created it.
But my mind began cluttering when she spoke the words,
"I can only stay a bit"
Damn. Did I lose another to stuttering or smothering?
In doubt, I remained cool.
With our hands we built a castle,
in case anyone attacked, we built a moat.
If they came on boat for the battle,
a turret where our knights shot arrows.
We had all of the defenses.
Unlike most girls..
she had no walls to get through,
barriers, or even fences.
The fact that her heart allowed me entrance,
rendered me defense-less.
From knight time, to night time, the moonlight shine.
I knew all I want is this.
A cloud over the moon, but when it passed..
a perfect kiss.
All the birds sang, and out jumped the fish..
a black panther in the woods raised his fist.
This is what I want..
Time stopped.
We fell asleep by the ocean.
The alarm clock..
"Oh, no it's time to go" and
then she got up,
gave me a kiss on my cheek,
then moved her mouth to speak..
"I've got to go before the sun rise"
Now, with a frown upon my face,
"You don't even have time for just oooone more race?"
Another grin, perhaps her last.
Fear in my mind, not ready to leave her in my past.
"If you aren't the one, you are the stencil"
before she disappeared she said..
"Listen I was just the beauty that's within you"
A few more steps and then she vanished,
I remained cool, a sudden sense of security
removed the would be, panic.
I look ahead at the waves of the sea,
and sit happily because..
I know there's better days ahead of me.