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NT.. I want
- Thread in 'Music' Thread starter Started by khemikalali,
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I'ma say...
First track: Not really feeling that "boop boop boop boop" instrument in the background. Lose that instrument ASAP! Your flow is on beat at times andoff beat most of the time. Your rapping voice sounds forced. Your lyrics sound too Immortal Technique yet too obvious at the same time. I get that youdon't like the government, but find a creative or unique way of saying it. Truth and youth have been rhymed so much that I cringe when I hear people use ittrying to sound like they're kicking knowledge. Let that rest with Wu-Tang.
Second track: "Here to remind the youth that I'm dying for the truth"... "President... Heaven sent" Nah. I'ma keep it all the wayreal with you homie, you sound like a fake Immortal Technique.
Rap isn't for everyone.
First track: Not really feeling that "boop boop boop boop" instrument in the background. Lose that instrument ASAP! Your flow is on beat at times andoff beat most of the time. Your rapping voice sounds forced. Your lyrics sound too Immortal Technique yet too obvious at the same time. I get that youdon't like the government, but find a creative or unique way of saying it. Truth and youth have been rhymed so much that I cringe when I hear people use ittrying to sound like they're kicking knowledge. Let that rest with Wu-Tang.
Second track: "Here to remind the youth that I'm dying for the truth"... "President... Heaven sent" Nah. I'ma keep it all the wayreal with you homie, you sound like a fake Immortal Technique.
Rap isn't for everyone.
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hahahah damn i was laughing at your comment.. not to be like F you or anything.. i just thought it was funny and it was your honest opinion.. Appreciated..
