Check out my band's First Music Video!!

[d 2 the lo]

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[sighfur]

I posted this in general right before the thread was locked.



Nice song, the chorus melody has good movement. I like the call and response in the chorus aswell. Video was cleverly simple.

The vocal presence during the rap verses is a lil off, imo. Dunno if its these tinny laptop speakers, or the actual vocal filter on the verses. I like vocals on rap verses to be pretty flat.

But by no means does it ruin it for me, I like the song, job well done.

 

[d 2 the lo]

Originally Posted by Sighfur

I posted this in general right before the thread was locked.



Nice song, the chorus melody has good movement. I like the call and response in the chorus aswell. Video was cleverly simple.

The vocal presence during the rap verses is a lil off, imo. Dunno if its these tinny laptop speakers, or the actual vocal filter on the verses. I like vocals on rap verses to be pretty flat.

But by no means does it ruin it for me, I like the song, job well done.

Thank you brother!  I'll be sure to relay your message to the rest of the guys!

 

[sighfur]

Link me to some other of your bands' music, if possible.

 

[d 2 the lo]

Originally Posted by Sighfur

Link me to some other of your bands' music, if possible.

http://urbancartel.bandcamp.com/

Here you go bro!  Let me know what you think!

 

[jordanjayyy7]

I like the video quality. Lol @ the guy not helping push the car. Is he not really there?

 

[CUNNiNGH4M]

pretty dope... smooth track and i liked the hook a lot... video is ill... wasnt expecting rappers when u said it was a band but it works

 

[d 2 the lo]

Originally Posted by MusicalExcellence

pretty dope... smooth track and i liked the hook a lot... video is ill... wasnt expecting rappers when u said it was a band but it works

I mean most of our music is live instrumentation...but we had to release the produced track for our first single since it was so smooth