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HaterZ!!! OMGZ!!!!!!...Originally Posted by bboy1827
Ehh no lie it sounds just like some stuff dudes on Niketalk would post(less a couple of people). It sounds mad amateur(probably because it is). Rhymes is ok, but flow needs mad work, well I mean it sounds hella New York and I've always thought as a Hip Hop City they had one of the worst flows as a whole. Henz you could be one of those fight club dudes ;see Murda Mook, Iron Solomon, etc until your flow gets better. Honestly the biggest surprise on this joint was Wes, dude is actually pretty nice. And this is a little bit of hate well maybe not hate but realization, posting on this board is a curse dudes will ride until dude gets off. Dom's joint was nice..and thats real. Jewels joint for some reason I listened a couple of times and I really can't listen to it, personal preference, he def deserves to be signed dude is nice as heck just can't listen to his joint. But this joint is actually pretty unimpressive. I know Imma get flamed for this, and be labeled this and that and it's all cool. You just got a lot of work to do, atleast flow wise.
"I think they're blinded by the thought of cuffin me/ then they realize and think about snuffin' me"
Mcnair coulda used this advice
Originally Posted by henz0
Damn
they just given these props to me, so im given em back to henz and How E stacksOriginally Posted by bboy1827
Ehh no lie it sounds just like some stuff dudes on Niketalk would post(less a couple of people). It sounds mad amateur(probably because it is). Rhymes is ok, but flow needs mad work, well I mean it sounds hella New York and I've always thought as a Hip Hop City they had one of the worst flows as a whole. Henz you could be one of those fight club dudes ;see Murda Mook, Iron Solomon, etc until your flow gets better. Honestly the biggest surprise on this joint was Wes, dude is actually pretty nice. And this is a little bit of hate well maybe not hate but realization, posting on this board is a curse dudes will ride until dude gets off. Dom's joint was nice..and thats real. Jewels joint for some reason I listened a couple of times and I really can't listen to it, personal preference, he def deserves to be signed dude is nice as heck just can't listen to his joint. But this joint is actually pretty unimpressive. I know Imma get flamed for this, and be labeled this and that and it's all cool. You just got a lot of work to do, atleast flow wise.
Beats: mediocre
Flow/lyricism: mediocre
Creativity: below par excellent
Fixed.
Theres no doubt what hes saying is slick. Multiple double entendre's throughout the whole joint.
my %*#!$ said "i dont sell drugs, but the dealer hand me keys"
As with all rappers first attempt, the flow/delivery needs work. But that comes with time/experience in the booth/recording. You can use any rapper and seethat. It took jay from like 88-95 to master his flow/delivery.
This man is openly admitting hes doing it as a hobby, as well as accepting criticism for real.
Keep grinding my g, Id love to see this @*$@ work out for you. Wish you much success.