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SRs review of the Peg33: https://www.solereview.com/nike-air-zoom-pegasus-33-review/
Thanks, always good to see new reviews/reviewers out there.
A constructive criticism though, if you don't mind especially if you plan to do it more often and to grow. Be a bit more detailed, you don't need to be SoleReview detailed but you could go deeper into some of your statements. You concluded that it was clunky but never really explained why, you mentioned the shoe was more rigid because of the outsole but it wasn't really clear what that meant.
Also, I'd do some proofreading or get an editor to read through it because there are some grammar problems with the whole review.
I am not being an a*hole so take no offense but your review definitely needs plenty of work. SoleReview is a pretty good place to start and pick up some good format and writing without the need to rip them off. Good luck though and keep at it!
I was actually surprised that it was as short as it was. Normally they hover around 3-400, up to 500 words. However, I avoid going too detailed because I've found most consumers simply don't care. As any Nike employee would tell you, I get very precise in my questioning haha. But from my experience in running specialty stores and general feedback on my site, no one wants a wall of text. Sometimes I'll do comparative reviews and just use an infographic, though.
Do you mind pointing out the grammar errors (PM probably best to not get too off-topic)? I generally try to stick to AP Style, but play fast and loose with it. Thank you for the feedback!
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