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Mez-- "Over here" is sick. I LOVE the sample you have in there, it especially makes for a nice intro. My only suggestion would be to change thelittle back and forth you have on your synths for the chorus. As soon as the drums drop, your synths are hanging on D for two bars and then jump up a third toF for two bars, and alternate like that. My suggestion would be to change that up for the chorus-- stay on that D (or you could bolster your synth by adding aD in a lower octave) and then instead of jumping up to F, jump down to B flat. trust me, it would make this beat a lot more epic. That said, I like this a lotso far.
Camiliano crown is nice and straight forward. I like the subtle strings on the chorus. In my opinion, the second verse needs some more... the vocal sample doesget a little tedious. I like the little drop out a little bit into the second verse... it helps.
I also really like "untitled". I think the bass drum hits one too many times, but it has a really nice overall polished feel. good work.
Shizzmyster- "Horizons" has that cool ATCQ feel, that midnight marauder kind of feel. I'm digging it a lot. Try to tighten up those strings inthe background so the fall into a part where it makes sense.
"from my feet" is smooth but in my opinion jumps around a bit too much without much to tie it together. If you're gonna lay those samples likethat, you need something to create a better coherence. Nice vibe, though.
digital022-- "Tyner" is cool, but obviously not finished. you have all the elements, but I think your bassline sits weird with me.
Here's something that I was working on a while ago, but never got around to finishing entirely. Let me know what you think:
Camiliano crown is nice and straight forward. I like the subtle strings on the chorus. In my opinion, the second verse needs some more... the vocal sample doesget a little tedious. I like the little drop out a little bit into the second verse... it helps.
I also really like "untitled". I think the bass drum hits one too many times, but it has a really nice overall polished feel. good work.
Shizzmyster- "Horizons" has that cool ATCQ feel, that midnight marauder kind of feel. I'm digging it a lot. Try to tighten up those strings inthe background so the fall into a part where it makes sense.
"from my feet" is smooth but in my opinion jumps around a bit too much without much to tie it together. If you're gonna lay those samples likethat, you need something to create a better coherence. Nice vibe, though.
digital022-- "Tyner" is cool, but obviously not finished. you have all the elements, but I think your bassline sits weird with me.
Here's something that I was working on a while ago, but never got around to finishing entirely. Let me know what you think: