darthska
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"[During a time in the NFL] when the NFL featured Chad Johnson and Terrell Owens [I recall] that Peyton Manning once told me he was grateful that..."I don’t understand what’s confusing about that.....
Peyton was grateful his two great WR’s were nothing like TO and Ochocinco personality wise when they were at the forefront of the NFL. That’s a pretty simple statement.
THAT... is a simple statement.
THIS:
"I recall when the NFL featured Chad Johnson and Terrell Owens that Peyton Manning once told me he was grateful that..."
... requires a bit of correction in order to e understood CLEARLY as opposed to understood presumptively. At the VERY LEAST, it needs 2 commas.
"I recall, when the NFL featured Chad Johnson and Terrell Owens, that Peyton Manning once told me he was grateful that..."