Originally Posted by
PersiaFly
Originally Posted by
niidawg3
i know a few people here and on other boards have been prodding me to create a blog. finally had some free time on my hands and whipped something up.
please check it out and give me some feedback ...
http://adabraka-sartorialist.tumblr.com/
thanks.
I'm glad you finally did this, it's long overdue.
My constructive critiques, since you asked:
1) I think all blogs look better against white backgrounds. Easier to read, cleaner look.
2) Not sure the little captions are necessary. I think the clothes speak for themselves, adding the "fashion tip" captions makes it seem as if you're trying to teach as opposed to share, and I think people are much more receptive to the latter. Same could be said about the quote at the bottom. If that's the motto of your blog, I think you can state it without attributing it to yourself, again sort of coming off as one looking to teach rather than to share. Not that I doubt that you are qualified to teach fashion, just that I think people are less receptive to that sort of thing.